I think your magazine is well presented but you could have added one more image on your DPS since you used 2 already and left a space at the end. I liked the use of colours on your article bit not many people did that.
-Cover: For teh cover, i like the idea of the masthead as a 'psalm'. You you kept a specific colour scheme throughout. The only thing is that, think about whether you are making your target market audience smaller by targeting a specific religion. Maybe promote other religions to so that they feel they can also read your magazine?
-Contents page: Again you stuck to your colour scheme throughout this page. Your contents are positioned very effectively on the page and are very clear. There is not too much space filled in yet it has enough on the page so that it is eye catching for the reader.
-DPS: Your title on this page is very good. It gives the reader an idea of what the journalism is going to be about. I like how you interviewed the model with good questions which makes the magazine look evern more proffessional. It has a very good value for money. Maybe for the image try and play with some effects so that you come out with a clearer image for this dps.
One thing I like is the use of colours on your DPS it goes well together. But i do think you should add more colours maybe for the background especially since it looks abit plain and bland. Some people might not understand what the genre of this magazine is alsos the name of the magazine doesn't really make sense to me
front cover - i don't think this looks like a front cover and doesn't really have a convensional layout. i tihnk you could use a better image.
contents page - i think that the contents looks more like a dps and looks overloaded with too much information and i tihnk you should cut it down and have a better layout for it.
dps - the layout for the journalism is good but i don't really think the smaller images go with the genre of the magazine and it seems that the models expression seem forced.
i like the idea of your magazine it is very unique. the contents page can become confusiing because it has alot of text. you may want to reconsider because you dont want your reader to get bored just reading the contents page
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I think your magazine is well presented but you could have added one more image on your DPS since you used 2 already and left a space at the end. I liked the use of colours on your article bit not many people did that.
ReplyDelete-Cover:
ReplyDeleteFor teh cover, i like the idea of the masthead as a 'psalm'. You you kept a specific colour scheme throughout. The only thing is that, think about whether you are making your target market audience smaller by targeting a specific religion. Maybe promote other religions to so that they feel they can also read your magazine?
-Contents page:
Again you stuck to your colour scheme throughout this page. Your contents are positioned very effectively on the page and are very clear. There is not too much space filled in yet it has enough on the page so that it is eye catching for the reader.
-DPS:
Your title on this page is very good. It gives the reader an idea of what the journalism is going to be about. I like how you interviewed the model with good questions which makes the magazine look evern more proffessional. It has a very good value for money. Maybe for the image try and play with some effects so that you come out with a clearer image for this dps.
One thing I like is the use of colours on your DPS it goes well together. But i do think you should add more colours maybe for the background especially since it looks abit plain and bland. Some people might not understand what the genre of this magazine is alsos the name of the magazine doesn't really make sense to me
ReplyDeletefront cover - i don't think this looks like a front cover and doesn't really have a convensional layout. i tihnk you could use a better image.
ReplyDeletecontents page - i think that the contents looks more like a dps and looks overloaded with too much information and i tihnk you should cut it down and have a better layout for it.
dps - the layout for the journalism is good but i don't really think the smaller images go with the genre of the magazine and it seems that the models expression seem forced.
i like the idea of your magazine it is very unique. the contents page can become confusiing because it has alot of text. you may want to reconsider because you dont want your reader to get bored just reading the contents page
ReplyDelete-Everything is laid out well which makes it more professional.
ReplyDelete-throughout the magazine you have kept the colour scheme consistant.
- i dont see what could be improved